Plan of action

Ok, have devised a plan of action on how to tackel my substandard thesis :

1. change wordings on some resutls chapters to make it sound more, umm, rounded
2. another sentence or 2 on justification of field sites.
3. probably need to defend choice of research material more also seeing that co-sup have 'Googled' research that counter my arguments.
4. add in a couple more definitions
5. cut back on concluding sections in the result chapters (3 pages each does sound a bit much. No wonder I'm already over the word limit with a couple of sections still MIA...)

There, sounds much better. Sound be out of here in 5 or 10

Ooh, tennis tonight